Hand Pressing Flashlight

what do you think of this poem?

We step blindly in the future
Armed with little more than flashlights and love
Headed for a meltdown
And treading water fast
I thought fighting the “good fight”
Wasenough
But these are hurried times
And the deafening crowd
Is boiling like madness
Acid and oil streaking
The sullied earth
Caught in a repitious 9 to 5
A rat race for the cheese
But the fat lady who sings ate it
Certainly now it must be over.
Though there are those that still
Press their sheets
And fall to their knees
To beg forgivness
I’d do the same, or fall down and face Mecca
If I was certain I was on the right path
No reassurance can be found
It’s a comfort no one can afford.
So, with a sharpened tongue
And a softened heart
A flashlight in one hand
The other hand clenched tightly in a fist
A new journey, I begin.
oh, I haven’t really punctuated or edited this, so it is in a really raw form

It’s a beautiful poem, and I love the beautiful religious meaning behind it. The only thing I could suggest would be to make the words a little more abstract, so as to give it a slightly deeper feeling.
Keep writing!

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