My poem, "University of Love" critique?
entering the University of Love When You study hard and practice go into great adventure You learn about love basics Innovative techniques and strategies will be quizzes and tests love first semester, about kissing you have to "queue know and signals The syllable is exciting you'll learn how experts quietly and not in a hurry Kiss Kiss Kiss sweet as honey with a passion Watch the lips when it curls when it smells like flowers Kiss, Kiss, kiss the neck and everywhere else at home to work closer with your lover and urge lay on the sofa and practice, if you love a fever should be ready with a fire extinguisher does not fail the tests Otherwise, you should know how the fire, keep practicing and repeat Keep your spirit high Do not discouraged to come closer to retreat and not cuddle cuddle And finally, you will pass and eventually you will get your love graduate with honors
You have put a lot of work in this beautiful piece. I earned my degree and my wings.
Fire Safety & Firewatch (Trailer)
