Please help with phrases in English.?
Dear native speakers, I’m making subtitles for a video-presentation and some phrases look pretty awkward to me. Would you please help?
It will help me a lot!
“We bring bright and clean water to your home for your safety”
“We improve the whole system of water supply”
“Now we are going to repair and improve all the outdated water treatment facilities”
“The first improvement phase will include the upgrade of pipeline ”
“Minimizing transportation inconvenience during construction by using new equipment”
“Solve the transportation problem by using new system, which occupies smaller ground area”
“Maximizing work efficiency by using Dry Cleaning Method”
“Dry pipe cleaning method eliminates time waste and maximizes work efficiency”
“Providing clean, bright and fresh water to citizens is our prime responsibility”
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4-”The first improvement phase will include the upgrade of (a) pipeline”
5-”Minimiz(e) transportation inconvenience during construction by using new equipment”
6-”Solve the transportation problem by using (a) new system, which occupies smaller ground area”
7-”Maximiz(e) work efficiency by using (a/the) Dry Cleaning Method”
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